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2011-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I am [이름] ^^ who stated first time with you I was glad to meet you. Tomorrow, we start first study. I want to improve ma speaking skill. I believe that you help me to study hard. Thank you. See you next class~~

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! A pleasure meeting you! Don't worry, I will do my best to help you but you have to do your part as well,okay? Here are your corrections,please check and analyze. Have a wonderful evening!^^   I am [이름] ^^ who stated first time with you >>I am [이름], I studied the first time with you.I was glad to meet you. >>CORRECT!Tomorrow, we start first study.>>We will start tomorrow with our first class.I want to improve ma speaking skill. >>I want to improve my English speaking skill.I believe that you help me to study hard.>>I believe that you can help me study hard.Thank you. >>CORRECT!See you next class~~ >>I'll see you on our next class. 

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