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It's raining here today.
Because it's the rainy season in korea.
I don't like usually this weather because of inconveience .
Forturnately, tomorrow it's sunny day so i can go around anywhere.
Anyway i have to study TOEIC now .
When i finish it, i will go to the bed .
See you next class .
Have a good night ^0^
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^^
Enjoy your day tomorrow but don't get yourself too tired!^^
Thank you for sending your composition.
Please check out the corrections I made. Good night!^^
It's raining here today.>>CORRECT!
>>It's raining right now.Because it's the rainy season in korea.>>It's the rainy season here in Korea.I don't like usually this weather because of inconveience .>>I don't usually like this weather because of its inconvenience.Forturnately, tomorrow it's sunny day so i can go around anywhere.>>Fortunately, tomorrow is a sunny day so I can go around anywhere.Anyway i have to study TOEIC now .>>Anyway, I have to study TOEIC now.When i finish it, i will go to the bed .>>When I'm done with it, I'll go to the bed.See you next class .>>I'll see you on our next class. Have a good night ^0^
>>CORRECT!
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