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2011-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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It's raining here today. Because it's the rainy season in korea. I don't like usually this weather because of inconveience . Forturnately, tomorrow it's sunny day so i can go around anywhere. Anyway i have to study TOEIC now . When i finish it, i will go to the bed . See you next class . Have a good night ^0^

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^^ Enjoy your day tomorrow but don't get yourself too tired!^^ Thank you for sending your composition. Please check out the corrections I made. Good night!^^ It's raining here today.>>CORRECT! >>It's raining right now.Because it's the rainy season in korea.>>It's the rainy season here in Korea.I don't like usually this weather because of inconveience .>>I don't usually like this weather because of its inconvenience.Forturnately, tomorrow it's sunny day so i can go around anywhere.>>Fortunately, tomorrow is a sunny day so I can go around anywhere.Anyway i have to study TOEIC now .>>Anyway, I have to study TOEIC now.When i finish it, i will go to the bed .>>When I'm done with it, I'll go to the bed.See you next class .>>I'll see you on our next class. Have a good night ^0^ >>CORRECT!  

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