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2017-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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1.How did you adapt to the changes when you were in Sydney? I tried to adapt the changes by learning new culture, adapting in their environment and following the way of life of people there. Learning new culture makes me more mature person and I can figure out what I have to do in the new environment. Through my experiences, I learned a lot of things about life and those things are valuable experiences in my life. 2. What is the difference between working in a hotel and aviation industry? I can say place is different. Working at aviation industry brings some kind of danger in the air while people work on the ground in a hotel. That is why we should more consider about safety in the air. Also, people can travle all over the world if peole work in the aivation industry. I think those two tings are different.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ji [이름]! Happy Monday!

Thank you for finding time to write a composition. ^_^ I really appreciate it!

I had fun with the discussion a while back but time flies so fast!

Anyway, have a great day ahead and take care!

~Teacher Rain~


1.How did you adapt to the changes when you were in Sydney?
I tried to adapt the changes by learning new culture, adapting in their environment and following the way of life of people there. Learning new culture makes me more mature person and I can figure out what I have to do in the new environment. Through my experiences, I learned a lot of things about life and those things are valuable experiences in my life.

>> I tried to adapt to the changes by learning new culture, adapting to their environment and following their way of life. Learning a new culture makes me more a mature person and makes me understand culture differences. Through these experiences, I learned a lot of valuable things about life.


2. What is the difference between working in a hotel and aviation industry?
I can say place is different. Working at aviation industry brings some kind of danger in the air while people work on the ground in a hotel. That is why we should more consider about safety in the air. Also, people can travle all over the world if peole work in the aivation industry. I think those two tings are different.

>>The difference of working in a hotel and aviation industry is the work place. Working in aviation industry is more dangerous than working in a hotel. That\'s why we should consider more the safety of our customers.Another difference is that in the aviation industry, we can have the opportunity to travel on different places and countries.








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