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1. What was your biggest achievement when you worked?
To meet customers need is my biggest achievement. When I worked at Mayfield hotel as a trainee, I helped customer who wants to use golf club at hotel. Unfortunately, hotel golf club was day-off, so I tried to find golf club near our hotel and checked whether they are open or not. It makes him happy and he was satisfied with my kind service. I also feel happy to meet my customer\'s requirements. 

>> To meet my customer\'s need is my biggest achievement. When I worked at Mayfield hotel as trainee, I helped a customer who wants to play at the golf club of the hotel. Unfortunately, The hotel golf club was in day-off, so I tried to look for another golf club near the hotel and check whether they were open or not. It made him happy and satisfied with my service. I was also happy to be able to meet my customer\'s requirement.

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2. Can you overcome your weakness easily?

>> In your answer, do not give situations wherein you feel stressed or depressed. You should answer \"YES\"  and explain on how will you overcome your weakness.