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2017-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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1. If you will not passs in this interview, what will be your future plan? If I will not be considered in your company, I know for sure that I lack of somthing. It could be skills maybe. That is why my future plan is going to analyze my self and improve more to be qualified for this position. Then I will apply again to grab my chance. 2. What is your hobby? I like working out and watching English movies. I take pilates class to keep my body. It's kind of yoga and really good for my health. I also like watching English movies such as romantic comedies. It helps me to relax and improve my listening skills. 3. What's happiness to you? I think happiness of my life is meeting as many people as I can and interacting each other. I feel happy and plreasure when I meet new people and get to know about them because I can broaden my view and get positive energy by meeting new poeple. There are all different people in the world. When I meet new people, I can get happiness.

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Hello Ji [이름]!! Happy Tuesday!

Please see and study my revisions on your answer.

Prepare for tomorrow because there are a lot of questions coming! ^_^

Anyway, have a great day and take care. See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Rain~


1. If you will not passs in this interview, what will be your future plan?
If I will not be considered in your company, I know for sure that I lack of somthing. It could be skills maybe. That is why my future plan is going to analyze my self and improve more to be qualified for this position. Then I will apply again to grab my chance.
>> If I will not be considered in your company, I know for sure that I lack something, it could on m
y skills or other. That\'s why my future plan is to evaluate myself and improve more to be qualified for this position. Then I will apply again to grab my chance.
2. What is your hobby?
I like working out and watching English movies. I take pilates class to keep my body. It\'s kind of yoga and really good for my health. I also like watching English movies such as romantic comedies. It helps me to relax and improve my listening skills.

>> I like working out. I take pilate classes , it\'s a kind of yoga to keep my body fit and it\'s really good for my health. I also like watching English movies such as romantic comedies. It helps me to relax and improve my listening skills as well as my communication skills.

 3. What\'s happiness to you?
I think happiness of my life is meeting as many people as I can and interacting each other. I feel happy and plreasure when I meet new people and get to know about them because I can broaden my view and get positive energy by meeting new poeple. There are all different people in the world. When I meet new people, I can get happiness.

>> I think happiness for me is meeting new people and interacting with them. I feel happy and pleasured when I meet new people and get to know about them because I can broaden my point of view and get positive energy by meeting them. There are different people in the world and I think learning their culture makes me happy.

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