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2017-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What do you consider to be your weekness? I'm a person who has to do everything myself. I consider this to be my weakness. If I am one of the employee, it doesn't matter that much. But I was a manager in my previous work, I had more than 20 people working for me. Sometimes I have to make soembody work, it's hard to me. I am guilty of putting someone work for me. But, I want to turn my weaknesses into strengths.

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Good afternoon! Hi there, [이름]!^_^   I guess you were not that busy today. Thank you so much for this composition. We can discuss this further later in class. I will see you then!^^   ..T. Mayleen :)   I\'m a person who has to do everything myself. >> I\'m a person who has to do everything by myself.OR: I\'m a person who has to do everything on my own. I consider this to be my weakness. >> I consider this as my weakness. If I am one of the employee, it doesn\'t matter that much. >> If I am one of the employees, it wouldn\'t matter that much. But I was a manager in my previous work, I had more than 20 people working for me. >> Correct! Sometimes I have to make soembody work, it\'s hard to me. >> Sometimes I have to make soembody work, it\'s hard to me.>> Sometimes I have to order them on what to do and it\'s hard for me. I am guilty of putting someone work for me. >> I am guilty of ordering others to work for me. But, I want to turn my weaknesses into strengths. >> Correct!

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