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2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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when jake was third grade they got five new computer in his classroom. mrs. snavin the jake’s third grade teacher acted like computers were scary, especially new ones. she always needed to look at a how- to book and the computer at the same time also she got mixed up a lot. Monday morning mrs. snavin was fighting with the computer. she was confused about a program that she need to use for a math project she kept watching her screen and looked at the book jake thought that he can help her. so, he taught her how to solve the problem teacher got really impressive to jake. then teacher said to jake “jake, you’re wonderful!” very loudly and patted him The problem began at this point. in the art class jake needed a small brush. then he found about 15 or 20 brushes were stickig out of a bucket full of dirty water

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when jake was third grade they got five new computer in his classroom.

>>When Jake was in 3rd grade they\'ve got five new computers in their classroom/

mrs. snavin the jake’s third grade teacher acted like computers were scary, especially new ones.

>>correct
 she always needed to look at a how- to book and the computer at the same time also she got mixed up a lot.

>>correct
 Monday morning mrs. snavin was fighting with the computer.

>>correct

she was confused about a program that she need to use for a math project

>>She was confused about a program that she needs to use for Math subject.
 she kept watching her screen and looked at the book

>>correct
 jake thought that he can help her. so, he taught her how to solve the problem

>>correct
 teacher got really impressive to jake. 

>>The teacher was so impressed to Jake.
 then teacher said to jake “jake, you’re wonderful!” very loudly and patted him

>>correct
 The problem began at this point.

>>correct
 in the art class jake needed a small brush. then he found about 15 or 20 brushes were stickig out of a bucket full of dirty water

>>correct

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