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when jake was third grade they got five new computer in his classroom.
>>When Jake was in 3rd grade they\'ve got five new computers in their classroom/
mrs. snavin the jake’s third grade teacher acted like computers were scary, especially new ones.
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she always needed to look at a how- to book and the computer at the same time also she got mixed up a lot.
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Monday morning mrs. snavin was fighting with the computer.
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she was confused about a program that she need to use for a math project
>>She was confused about a program that she needs to use for Math subject.
she kept watching her screen and looked at the book
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jake thought that he can help her. so, he taught her how to solve the problem
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teacher got really impressive to jake.
>>The teacher was so impressed to Jake.
then teacher said to jake “jake, you’re wonderful!” very loudly and patted him
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The problem began at this point.
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in the art class jake needed a small brush. then he found about 15 or 20 brushes were stickig out of a bucket full of dirty water
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