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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello eunice. I got your feedback today. Thank you for your teaching. I have some confusing sentances. Can you correct it for me? -what do you think we have a discussion time? I think it will be helpful to (progress/ enhance) our expression skill. -My major in the college was a speech language pathology. It is helping handicaped peaple which is specialized for the language disorder. -My ultimate goal is to verbally express the all i have on my mind in english. My ultimate goal is to verbally express what i have on my mind all in english. -The pilates was for a physical therapy before. and now peaple do it for a muscle training and (their body shape/making shape) - And this is about your feedback. You send me "my parents hous is nearby my house." Is that supposed to be "My parents house is located near my house. or My parents house is nearby from my house. "? what do you think about this? -Thank you for your time. and i want you to have a good evening. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!


I like reading your composition. Keep having the interest to write more compositions to fully polish your writing skills. I underlined all the misspelled words. I revised some of your sentences and I hope that it would be a great help for you!

You\'re amazing!

Here are my corrections for you.

See you on Wednesday!

~T. Eunice ^^


Hello eunice.

>> Hello Eunice!

I got your feedback today.

>> Correct

Thank you for your teaching.
>> Correct

OR

>> Thank you for teaching me.
 I have some confusing sentances.

>> I have some confusing sentences.

Can you correct it for me?
>> Correct
-what do you think we have a discussion time?

>> What do you think if we have a discussion time?

I think it will be helpful to (progress/ enhance) our expression skill.
>>
I think it will be helpful for us to enhance our communication skill.
-My major in the college was a speech language pathology. 

>> I majored in Speech Language Pathology. 
 It is helping handicaped peaple which is specialized for the language disorder.

>> It is a field where we help handicaped people who have speech and language disorders.

OR
>> Speech Language Pathology provides treatment, support and care for children and adults who have difficulties with communication.
-My ultimate goal is to verbally express the all i have on my mind in english.
My ultimate goal is to verbally express what i have on my mind all in english.
>>  M
y ultimate goal is to verbally express myself in English.
-The pilates was for a physical therapy before.

>> The Pilates was used for physical therapy. 

OR

>> Physical therapists were using Pilates as a form of rehabilitation.
 and now peaple do it for a muscle training and (their body shape/making shape)
>> Nowadays, people use it for a muscle training.

OR

>> Nowadays, Pilates is being used in fitness programs.
 And this is about your feedback.

>> Correct
You send me \"my parents hous is nearby my house.\"
Is that supposed to be \"My parents house is located near my house.
or My parents house is nearby from my house. \"?
what do you think about this?

These are the following answers:
>> My parents\' house is nearby my house.

OR

>> My parents\' house is nearby my place.

OR

>> My parents\' house is located near my house.
-Thank you for your time.
and i want you to have a good evening.
Bye.

>> Thank you for your time and have a good night.
Bye.

>> Goodbye!

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