hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I was also happy when I met you. You were fun to talk to.
I hope that I can get to know you better not only as a student, but as a good person as well.
Thank you for this message and for doing your homework. ^^
See you later!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
hello dianne!
>> Hello, Dianne!
I was happy when last night class.
>> I was happy with last night\'s class.
>> or: I was happy with the class last night.
My homework that you gave me.
>> This is the homework that you gave me.
< What is your favorite fruit and why?>
>> correct
my answer is....
>> My answer is...
My favorite fruit is blueberry.
>> correct
because freezen blueberry is very cheep in korea and it is healthy fruit and it is various ways to eat.
>> It\'s because frozen blueberry is very cheep in Korea and it is a healthy kind of fruit and it can be eaten in various ways.
thank you, bye~
>> Thank you. Goodbye!
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