Hello~

2017-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Dianne~ I'm sorry. I'm so late what my homework. Already wednesday today. You know what I'm lazy. I'm sorry.ㅠㅠ After 1hour we will meet. I'm expecting. This is homework that you gave me. <If you would like to have a pet, what would it be and why?> I'm really love animal. so I always hope grow pet. Especially I love cat and dog. Because they had smooth hair and lovely face. Nowdays, I think about grow pet. Because I live alone. Thank you, Dianne bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s nice to talk to you again.

You have such a wonderful attitude in learning English.

I would like to say thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s late. ^^

It\'s fine with me. You want to have a pet? It\'s a nice idea so that you\'ll have a companion.

Let\'s talk again on Friday!


_Teacher Diane ^^


Hi Dianne~
>> Hi, Dianne! 


 I\'m sorry. I\'m so late what my homework.
>> I\'m sorry If I did my homework late.


 Already wednesday today.
>> It\'s already Wednesday today.


 You know what I\'m lazy. I\'m sorry.ㅠㅠ
>> correct


After 1hour we will meet.
>> We will meet after one hour.


 I\'m expecting.
>> I\'m expecting that.


 This is homework that you gave me.

>> This is the homework that you gave me.

< If you would like to have a pet, what would it be and why?>

>> correct

 I\'m really love animal. so I always hope grow pet.

>> I really love animals and I always hope to take care of a pet.

Especially I love cat and dog.
Because they had smooth hair and lovely face.

>> I love animals, especially cats and dogs because they have smooth hair and a lovely face.

>> or:  I love animals, especially cats and dogs because they have smooth fur and a cute face.

 Nowdays, I think about grow pet.
>> 
Nowadays, I think about having a pet.

>> or: I\'m thinking of taking care of a pet these days. 


 Because I live alone. 

>> correct

 Thank you, Dianne bye~

>> Thank you, Dianne. Bye!

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