Hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s nice to talk to you again.
You have such a wonderful attitude in learning English.
I would like to say thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s late. ^^
It\'s fine with me. You want to have a pet? It\'s a nice idea so that you\'ll have a companion.
Let\'s talk again on Friday!
_Teacher Diane ^^
Hi Dianne~
>> Hi, Dianne!
I\'m sorry. I\'m so late what my homework.
>> I\'m sorry If I did my homework late.
Already wednesday today.
>> It\'s already Wednesday today.
You know what I\'m lazy. I\'m sorry.ㅠㅠ
>> correct
After 1hour we will meet.
>> We will meet after one hour.
I\'m expecting.
>> I\'m expecting that.
This is homework that you gave me.
>> This is the homework that you gave me.
< If you would like to have a pet, what would it be and why?>
>> correct
I\'m really love animal. so I always hope grow pet.
>> I really love animals and I always hope to take care of a pet.
Especially I love cat and dog. Because they had smooth hair and lovely face.
>> I love animals, especially cats and dogs because they have smooth hair and a lovely face.
>> or: I love animals, especially cats and dogs because they have smooth fur and a cute face.
Nowdays, I think about grow pet.
>> Nowadays, I think about having a pet.
>> or: I\'m thinking of taking care of a pet these days.
Because I live alone.
>> correct
Thank you, Dianne bye~
>> Thank you, Dianne. Bye!
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