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Today I will tell you about.

my favorite season? why do i like it and what is my favorite things about it? 

>> Today, I will tell you about my favorite season and the best thing about it.

My favorite season is summer because is hot and i can goto sea and eat very delicous food.
>>  My favorite season is the summer season because it is hot and I can go to the beach and eat delicious foods.

I hate sea but i like to eat delicous food so I like going to a sea.
>> I hate the sea but I like to eat delicious foods so I like going to the beach.

And I like the fan.
Because the design are beautiful.

>> I also like fans because of they\'re beautiful designs.