hello
학생이 쓴 원문
sweet night, hello.
I do not know who check my my writting. So much time is changed thechers. Never give me any notice :-< Whenever I take my call, say hello some strong person.
So, how can I remember my thecher's name.
Anyway, last time my thecher say about something, but I can not understend. too sorry . hu..
Please take care me.
Who is the my next thecher? She cares me go on?
I think I NEED a big help to make me smart. Recermend me any good way.
강사 첨삭
Hello there:)
Thank you for the composition.
Don't worry, I can assure you that your teacher will help you and take care of you.
SMILE:)
sweet night, hello.
>>Sweet night. Hello!
I do not know who check my my writting.
>> I do not know who will be checking my composition.
So much time is changed thechers.
>>Every now and then, I have a new teacher.
Never give me any notice :-<
>>They don't give me any notice.
Whenever I take my call, say hello some strong person.
>>Whenever I take my call and say hello, I hear a different person.
So, how can I remember my thecher's name.
>>So, how can I remember my teacher's name?Anyway, last time my thecher say about something, but I can not understend. too sorry . hu..
>>Anyway, last time, my teacher said something, but I didn't understand.Please take care me.
>>Please take care of me.Who is the my next thecher?
>>Who will be my next teacher?
She cares me go on?
>>Will she take care of me?I think I NEED a big help to make me smart.
>>I think I need a big help in enhancing my English skills.
Recermend me any good way.
>>Recommend me in a good way.
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