Hello^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Miss [이름]^^
Thank you very much for doing your homework^^
I am also thankful for having you in class!
Don\'t worry, I understand that you are so busy juggling your work and family life, ha! ha!
See you~!
Hello, Miss. [Name]🌸
>>Hello, Miss. [Name].
I always see your feedback.
>>CORRECT!
I think that thank you for your teaching and feedback.
>>I think I am thankful for your teaching and feedback.
I want my homework, but I busy after I finish work.
>>I want to do my homework, but I am busy after I finish work.
I decided that I try the homework.
>> I decided to try doing the homework.
However today homework is difficult. hahaha😂
>>However, today\'s homework is difficult. Ha! Ha! Ha!
Homework
>>CORRECT!
I said to my daughter.
>>CORRECT!
“You must always be tight my hand the outside.
>>You must always hold my hand tight outside.
“You must always be quite the public places.
>>You must always be quiet in public places.
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