Hello^^

2018-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Miss. [Name]🌸 I always see your feedback. I think that thank you for your teaching and feedback. I want my homework, but I busy after I finish work. I decided that I try the homework. However today homework is difficult. hahaha😂 Homework I said to my daughter. “You must always be tight my hand the outside. “You must always be quite the public places.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Miss [이름]^^

Thank you very much for doing your homework^^

I am also thankful for having you in class!

Don\'t worry, I understand that you are so busy juggling your work and family life, ha! ha!

See you~!

Hello, Miss. [Name]🌸

>>Hello, Miss. [Name].
 I always see your feedback.

>>CORRECT!
 I think that thank you for your teaching and feedback. 

>>I think I am thankful for your teaching and feedback. 
 I want my homework, but I busy after I finish work. 

>>I want to do my homework, but I am busy after I finish work. 
 I decided that I try the homework.

>> I decided to try doing the homework.

However today homework is difficult. hahaha😂
>>
However, today\'s homework is difficult. Ha! Ha! Ha!
Homework

>>CORRECT!
 I said to my daughter.

>>CORRECT!
“You must always be tight my hand the outside.

>>You must always hold my hand tight outside.
“You must always be quite the public places.

>>You must always be quiet in public places.

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