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2011-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi~ I've heard our conversation by MP3. Oh! my voice and attitude were horrible! As you know, this morning I was not a good condition. I felt much pain in my all body so I couldn't think clearly. I was afraid of teacing because my students make me hard almost everytime. However amazingly when I saw them I felt much better. Maybe I've got some positive energy from them. I've not noticed that.haha have a good evening and see you tomorrow~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Don't feel bad about it, it's ok.  Wow! That's good, you got positive energy from your students. Don't be afraid of teaching because it's a privilege to teach those kids. Even if they make it difficult for you just be patient and when you see that they are learning for sure you will be very happy. Take care! CORRECTIONS: I've heard our conversation by MP3.>>I heard our conversation through the MP3. Oh! my voice and attitude were horrible!>>CORRECT! As you know, this morning I was not a good condition.>> As you know, this morning I was not in a good condition. I felt much pain in my all body so I couldn't think clearly.>>I felt much pain in all over my body so I couldn't think clearly. I was afraid of teacing because my students make me hard almost everytime.>>I am afraid of teaching because my students make it difficult everytime. However amazingly when I saw them I felt much better.>>However, when I saw them I felt much better. Maybe I've got some positive energy from them.>>CORRECT! I've not noticed that.haha>>I didn't notice that.hahahave a good evening and see you tomorrow >>Have a good evening and see you tomorrow.

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