Hello!

I entry other english programm in my university! So my english skill may be high. I will do my best! last monday, I was fight with my sis. She don't forgive me yet. I am very so sorry to my sis. We will must make up! Ummm.. nowadays it's too cold. The waether became a fall. I like a fall because I can wear a cool clother. surprised, others be doen study! When I wend home early. so today I stay at uni, and I also study well. the cold weather make me stay indoor. But I have to exercise ! Maybe when you call me, I will wark a park. see you night!

Hello Minjeong^^ Oh! You surprised me that you wrote quite a long letter today, that's nice. Guess you are really overwhelmed with your emotions. All you have to do is make a productive thing out of your circumstance^^. Read through the corrections I've made. Focus on your capitalization, correct punctuation, proper word usage and grammar. T' Joan   Contents I entry other english programm in my university! >> I sent my entry to another English program in my University! So my english skill may be high. >>So my English skill may be developed. I will do my best! >>CORRECT!last monday, I was fight with my sis. >>Last Monday, I fought with my sister. She don't forgive me yet. >>She hasn't forgiven me yet. I am very so sorry to my sis. >>I feel very sorry to my sister. We will must make up! >>We must make up!Ummm.. nowadays it's too cold. >>Ummm.. Nowadays, it's too cold.The waether became a fall. >>The weather became fall.I like a fall because I can wear a cool clother. >>I like fall because I can wear cool clothes.surprised, others be doen study! >>Surprisingly, others will be studying! When I wend home early. >>I went home early.so today I stay at uni, and I also study well. >>So today, I'm staying at the university and I'm also studying well.the cold weather make me stay indoor. >>The cold weather makes me stay indoor.But I have to exercise ! >>CORRECT!Maybe when you call me, I will wark a park. >>When you call me, I might be taking a walk at the park.see you night! >>See you tonight!