Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry, teacher.
Yesterday, I couldn't answer your phone call.
Because, I went to my friend without my cell phone.
My friend pet suddenly died, she was crying when I saw her.
I didn't know what should I say to her, because I don't have a experience.
People know, nothing forever in our life.
We can be a rich and poor, healthy and unhealthy.
And we will die someday, and also animals and plants can die.
However, people don't realize when they together.
So we don't know their value.
Yesterday was very sad day to my friend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for informing me about your absence. I'm so glad to see you in this side of our website. I'm so sad to hear abouty your friend's pet. I remember my friend when we were still young. Her puppy was was hit by a car. She carried the bloody puppy on her lap while crying. I know it was paindul for because she came to love it. I think this really teaches us a lesson to love and cherish our love one before it's too late. Take care!
-T.Verna-
Sorry, teacher.
>>CorrectYesterday, I couldn't answer your phone call.
>>CorrectBecause, I went to my friend without my cell phone.
>>CorrectMy friend pet suddenly died, she was crying when I saw her.
>> My friend's pet suddenly died, she was crying when I saw her.I didn't know what should I say to her, because I don't have a experience.
>> I didn't know what should I say to her, because I don't have an experience like that.People know, nothing forever in our life.
>> People know nothing is forever in this life.We can be a rich and poor, healthy and unhealthy.
>> We might be rich, poor, healthy and unhealthy.
And we will die someday, and also animals and plants can die.
>> And we will all die someday, same with animals and plants.
However, people don't realize when they together.
>> However, people don't realize that when we are together.
So we don't know their value.
>>CorrectYesterday was very sad day to my friend.
>>Yesterday, was a very sad day for my friend.
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