Hello~

2011-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday's class was fine. Thank you.^^ When I got a stess I will express it in words you said yesterday. I applied to a company yesterday. I am worried about that. I hope that good news is listened. Have a nice day. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for your article today. I hope that you will be accepted in the company where you applied. Just think positive! Have a great day! Yesterday's class was fine. >> CORRECT.Thank you.^^ >> Thank you! When I got a stess I will express it in words you said yesterday. >> I will tell you the details of my test like I promised.I applied to a company yesterday. >> CORRECT. I am worried about that. >> CORRECT.I hope that good news is listened.>>I hope that the result is good. Have a nice day. >>CORRECT.Thank you. >>Thank you!

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