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How are you? I am fine. Today was a lettle busy. I went to gangwoen-do where is located far from seoul. So I needed to ride buy for a long time. I departured at office at 7 o'clock by car. I arrrived the hospital at 9 and met with doctor who am using our ultrasound mechine. There was some problem. I fixed the mechine by exchanging a part. After working at hospital, I had a lunch very deliciously. And I came back at office.

Hi [이름]! Thanks for writing your composition for today. You have to remember that you need to capitalize the first letter of a proper noun such as people's names and name of places. Have a good day! -Tiny^0^ How are you? >>correctI am fine. >>correctToday was a lettle busy. >>spelling check: little >> Today was a little busy.I went to gangwoen-do where is located far from seoul. >> I went to Gangwoen-do which is located far from Seoul.So I needed to ride buy for a long time. >>spelling check: bus >> So I needed to ride a bus for a long time. I departured at office at 7 o'clock by car. >> I departured at the office at 7 o'clock by car. I arrrived the hospital at 9 and met with doctor who am using our ultrasound mechine. >> spelling check: machine >> I arrrived at the hospital at 9 and met with the doctor who is using our ultrasound machine. There was some problem. >>correctI fixed the mechine by exchanging a part. >> spelling check: machine >>I fixed the machine by changing a part. After working at hospital, I had a lunch very deliciously. >> After working at the hospital, I had a lunch very deliciously. >> After working at the hospital, I had a very delicious lunch. And I came back at office. >> And I came back at the office. >> And I came back to the office.