Hello!

Hello [이름]!!!

It\'s study this on Monday....

You can be good in speaking the English language; you just need to have confidence.

T. Jeny

Let me introduce.
>>Let me introduce myself.
Hello my name is Jiwon Kim .

>>correct
 And my english name is [이름].

>>And my English name is [이름].
 I\'m 22 years old. 

>>correct
 My character is cheerful and positive.

>>I have a cheerful and positive character.
 I\'m living with my father and mother.

>> I\'m living with my father and my mother.
 My father is very kind and humorous. 

>>correct
 He is working at a company.

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OR>>He is a company worker.
 My mother is housewife.

>>My mother is a housewife.
 She is good cooker.

>>She is a good cook.
 I like enjoy travel.

>>I enjoy travelling.
 When I was young, I go to Saipan and Thailand with my family.

>>When I was young, I went to Saipan and Thailand with my family.
 It was a great trip in my life.
>>Those were the greatest trips in my life. 

Hello Jeny! I want speaking english very fluence about me.

>>Hello Jeny! I want to speak English fluently in introducing myself.
But I can\'t. So please help me. 

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 And I want add my information.

>>correct

Please recommend good subject! 

>>Please recommend a good subject! 
 I like you so much! See you~!

>>correct