HELLO:)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jane!
I enjoy talking to you every day because you gamely answer my questions.
You\'re very much welcome. ^^
Enjoy your special day. ^____^
You\'re a year older again. It\'s time to get married. kkk Just teasing you. haha
Oh my! I should tell that to myself rather. ^^
Talk to you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne
Hi Teacher!
>> correct
Thank you very much for the congratulations.
>> correct
>> or: Thank you very much for g[이름]ting me.
I relly enjoy the call with you everyday.
>> I really enjoy the call with you every day.
This is my homework today.
>> correct
Do you have a birthday wish for yourself or for the people you love?
>> correct
My birthday wish is my family\'s health.
>> My birthday wish is my family\'s good health.
I think rich is meaningless without health.
>> I think being rich is meaningless without good health.
>> or: I think being rich is meaningless if you are not healthy.
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