Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
I got up today at time I usually get up.
And I washed my face and hand.
I bought a bread at bread store.
I came at the office taking a bread bought.
And I am writing this.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for writing a composition. I will see you later. Take care always!
T.Tiny
Here are your corrections:
I got up today at time I usually get up.>>I got up today at the time I usually get up.
And I washed my face and hand.>>And I washed my face and hands.
I bought a bread at bread store.>>I bought bread at the bread store.
I came at the office taking a bread bought.>>I brought the bread with me to work.
And I am writing this.
>>And now, I am writing this composition.
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