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2011-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I got up today at time I usually get up. And I washed my face and hand. I bought a bread at bread store. I came at the office taking a bread bought. And I am writing this.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for writing a composition. I will see you later. Take care always! T.Tiny Here are your corrections: I got up today at time I usually get up.>>I got up today at the time I usually get up. And I washed my face and hand.>>And I washed my face and hands. I bought a bread at bread store.>>I bought bread at the bread store. I came at the office taking a bread bought.>>I brought the bread with me to work. And I am writing this. >>And now, I am writing this composition.

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