Hello~

2011-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I arrived at my office a little early than arriving usually. So I write this composition. this is likely to become fun. I want to live today with got togather too. Buy~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I\'m happy that you went to work early. This is trully a nice start to your day. Just continue with your hard work. Here are my corrections and suggestions. ^^ Talk to you later. ^^ -Tiny^0^ I arrived at my office a little early than arriving usually. >>Today, I arrived at my office earlier than usual.So I write this composition. >>So I wrote this composition.this is likely to become fun. >>I think it\'s going to be a fun day. >>It\'s most likely to be a fun day today.I want to live today with got togather too. >>I want to live and enjoy life today. >>I want to spend this day with get together too.Buy~ >>spelling check: Bye

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