Hello
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently I am very tired.
I have not experience that work in office.
I usually work in survice part like cashier.
Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system, professional vocabulary.
That is hard.
And the hardest thing is sitting durig 6 or 7 hours.
I got backache.
I didn't know officer is hard job, I think they just go to office and make report or look at computer.
Now I totally understand their feeling.
Everyday, I just wating for Friday.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for sending a nice composition and for sharing your experience. Every job is not that easy but at least you know the hardship. Nice job!
T. Verna
Here are my corrections:
Recently I am very tired.
>> Recently, I am very tired.I have not experience that work in office.
>> I didn't experience it in the office.I usually work in survice part like cashier.>> I usually work as a customer service. It's like cashier.
Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system, professional vocabulary.
>> Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system and professional vocabulary.That is hard.
>> That is hard.And the hardest thing is sitting durig 6 or 7 hours.
>> Sitting for 6 or 7 hours is the hardest thing.I got backache.
>> CorrectI didn\'t know officer is hard job, I think they just go to office and make report or look at computer.
>> I didn\'t know that being an officer is a hard job but I think, they just go to the office and make reports or staring at the computer.Now I totally understand their feeling.>> Now, I totally understand their feeling.
Everyday, I just wating for Friday.
>> Everyday, I just wait for Friday.
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