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2011-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Recently I am very tired. I have not experience that work in office. I usually work in survice part like cashier. Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system, professional vocabulary. That is hard. And the hardest thing is sitting durig 6 or 7 hours. I got backache. I didn't know officer is hard job, I think they just go to office and make report or look at computer. Now I totally understand their feeling. Everyday, I just wating for Friday.

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Hi! Thank you for sending a nice composition and for sharing your experience. Every job is not that easy but at least you know the hardship. Nice job! T. Verna Here are my corrections:   Recently I am very tired. >> Recently, I am very tired.I have not experience that work in office. >> I didn't experience it in the office.I usually work in survice part like cashier.>> I usually work as a customer service. It's like cashier. Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system, professional vocabulary. >> Everything is new to me. I have to learn using system and professional vocabulary.That is hard. >> That is hard.And the hardest thing is sitting durig 6 or 7 hours. >> Sitting for 6 or 7 hours is the hardest thing.I got backache. >> CorrectI didn\'t know officer is hard job, I think they just go to office and make report or look at computer. >> I didn\'t know that being an officer is a hard job but I think, they just go to the office and make reports or staring at the computer.Now I totally understand their feeling.>> Now, I totally understand their feeling. Everyday, I just wating for Friday. >> Everyday, I just wait for Friday.

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