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2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think. If i can pick character from the movie, I want to choose Potato. We can show it Toy Story1~3 movie He have a very big mouse and nose These days I can’t sleep very well so I often feel tried when I work everyday anyway have a good day techer. See you latter

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Let\'s always focus on the questions.

I hope for a more comprehensive explanation next time.

I know you can always do better.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think. If i can pick character from the movie, I want to choose Potato.

>> I think that if I can pick a character from a movie, it would be Potato.
We can show it Toy Story1~3 movie

>> We can see this character in the movie, \"Toy Story 3.\"
He have a very big mouse and nose

>> He has a very big mouth and nose.

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