Hello~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Teacher, I want to tell you about my cats now.
I told you before that two of cats disapperared, so I was worrying them.
and Last night, One of them finally appeared!! She is my favorite kitty.
Anyway, She appeared with her mother, but her ear was servered.
I don't know what happened to her. She seemed very tired and scared.
At ordinary times, she used to play with me, but last night, she was hiding behind the mother cat.
Also she didn't look at me. She just ate very fastly and disappered again.
I'm really worrying her, It's too much cruel to her. I hope she recover not only her body but also her mind and she appears brightly as she used to.
And.. Yes! They sang in English, I don't remember the title of the song. Hmmm, It was original soundtrack of the movie 'Freaky Friday'
강사 첨삭
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Yeah, I agree or stray cats like them, it could be a very cruel world. I believe they have had a cruel experience with humans lately. It has caused the kittens change of attitude towards you. Feel so sorry for them. I just don't wanna think of what could have happened to the other kitty.
Hello Teacher, I want to tell you about my cats now.
>>Hello teacher, I wanna tell you something about my cats. I told you before that two of cats disapperared, so I was worrying them.
>>I told you that 2 of the cats disappeared so I was really worrying about them. and Last night, One of them finally appeared!! She is my favorite kitty.
>>last night, on of them suddenly appeared and she was my favorite kitty. Anyway, She appeared with her mother, but her ear was servered.
>>Anyway, she appeared with her mother but her ear was wounded. I don't know what happened to her. She seemed very tired and scared.
>>I don't know what happened to her but she looks so tired and scared. At ordinary times, she used to play with me, but last night, she was hiding behind the mother cat.
>>She used to play with me but last night she was hiding behind her mother. Also she didn't look at me. She just ate very fastly and disappered again.
>>She didn't ven looked at me, she just ate fast and then disappeared again. I'm really worrying her, It's too much cruel to her.
>>I'm really worried of her, it's such a cruel world for her.
I hope she recover not only her body but also her mind and she appears brightly as she used to.>>she hope she recovers not only on her health but also be able to go back to her bright character. And.. Yes! They sang in English, I don't remember the title of the song.
>>correct
Hmmm, It was original soundtrack of the movie 'Freaky Friday']
>>it was the original sound track of the movie Freaky Friday?
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