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학생이 쓴 원문
It is raining today in korea.
My weekends was great.
I bought a bag for my girlfriend on last saturday.
It was very expensive.
I have to spend a money a little this month.
My colleage on my team came back from hanimoon.
So I will be better to work.
Today is monday.
I read a sentense on a internet new.
It said that many people have a monday desease.
A lot of people feel tired on monday.
It is liky to be right.
If people had a rest on sunday they would be good on monday.
But almost people is not so.
I think It is problem.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!! Thank you for your composition. I hope you\'ll feel much better when I see you in class later. Have a nice day!!!
Here are my corrections:
It is raining today in korea.
>>Correct!My weekends was great.
>>My weekend was great.I bought a bag for my girlfriend on last saturday.
>>I bought a bag for my girlfriend last Saturday.It was very expensive.
>>Correct!I have to spend a money a little this month.>>I have to spend a little money this month.
My colleage on my team came back from hanimoon.
>>My colleague from my team came back from his honeymoon.So I will be better to work.
>>So I can now work better.Today is monday.
>>Today is Monday.tense on a internet new.
>>I feel tense on an internet news.
It said that many people have a monday desease.
>>It is stated that many people have a Monday disease.
A lot of people feel tired on monday.
>>A lot of people feel tired during Monday.
It is liky to be right.>>It is quite right.
If people had a rest on sunday they would be good on monday.>>If people had a good rest during Sunday they would feel much better on Monday.
But almost people is not so.>>But most people don\'t.
I think It is problem.
>>I think it is a problem.
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