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2011-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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It is raining today in korea. My weekends was great. I bought a bag for my girlfriend on last saturday. It was very expensive. I have to spend a money a little this month. My colleage on my team came back from hanimoon. So I will be better to work. Today is monday. I read a sentense on a internet new. It said that many people have a monday desease. A lot of people feel tired on monday. It is liky to be right. If people had a rest on sunday they would be good on monday. But almost people is not so. I think It is problem.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Thank you for your composition. I hope you\'ll feel much better when I see you in class later. Have a nice day!!!   Here are my corrections: It is raining today in korea. >>Correct!My weekends was great. >>My weekend was great.I bought a bag for my girlfriend on last saturday. >>I bought a bag for my girlfriend last Saturday.It was very expensive. >>Correct!I have to spend a money a little this month.>>I have to spend a little money this month. My colleage on my team came back from hanimoon. >>My colleague from my team came back from his honeymoon.So I will be better to work. >>So I can now work better.Today is monday. >>Today is Monday.tense on a internet new. >>I feel tense on an internet news. It said that many people have a monday desease. >>It is stated that many people have a Monday disease. A lot of people feel tired on monday. >>A lot of people feel tired during Monday. It is liky to be right.>>It is quite right. If people had a rest on sunday they would be good on monday.>>If people had a good rest during Sunday they would feel much better on Monday. But almost people is not so.>>But most people don\'t. I think It is problem. >>I think it is a problem.  

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