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2019-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

How long have you been studying English? What have you learned during such time? I start studying English at 7 years old. I also studied English in middle schoole, High school and University. But, I can\'t still speak English naturally. That\'s why I signed up in Power English. I know I study harder and stadily. I think studying steadily seems to be the answer. AND I hope you eat Shine Muscat! It is really expensive but REALLY delicious! (15,000[이름] a piece)

강사 첨삭

Hi Kate!
Thank you for your efforts today.
Please study the correct sentence patterns below.
That was a good effort.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I start studying English at 7 years old. 
>> I started studying English when I was 7 years old.
I also studied English in middle schoole, High school and University.
>> I also studied English in middle school, high school and college.
But, I can\'t still speak English naturally. 
>> However, I still can\'t speak English naturally. 
That\'s why I signed up in Power English.
>> That\'s why I signed up with Power English.
I know I study harder and stadily. 
>> I know that I can study harder and more consistently.
I think studying steadily seems to be the answer.
>> I think constant study is the answer.

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