HELLO,
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
Oh, glad meet you, Sharon. i hope i can be better in speaking English. and Fortunately for you, I\'m quite passionate student who doesn\'t need mother\'s urge for studying:) so, please, let me improve myself by teaching me many thing as possible. Too much feedback? for me, nothing too much. and i wrote down some template which i can speak for interview below so please check if they have any errors.
-do u know the famous statement “Singapore is a fine city.”, As a citizen of Korea, i can’t even imagine that I can’t access to public wifi without permission and i should pay a fine becuz of access.
-chicago templete
“Chicago”. Yes, i agree with that, becuz i’ve been there. But, Do u know the reason? It’s becuz After the Great Chicago Fire in 1871 which destroyed a third of the city, The state authority needs to control building structure.
강사 첨삭
Hi Louie!
This is a good start for a composition.
I would just like you to take note of a few things.
You have to be mindful of capitalization and punctuation.
You also need to type the complete spelling of words.
Writing is different from speaking so make sure that your thoughts are organized.
Reread your work and make sure that everything makes sense.
I look forward to your future work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Oh, glad meet you, Sharon.
>> Oh, glad to meet you, Sharon.
i hope i can be better in speaking English.
>> I hope I can be better in speaking English.
and Fortunately for you, I\'m quite passionate student who doesn\'t need mother\'s urge for studying:)
>> Fortunately, for you, I\'m quite a passionate student who doesn\'t need my mother to urge me to study.
so, please, let me improve myself by teaching me many thing as possible.
>> So, please, let me improve myself by teaching me as many things as possible.
Too much feedback?
>> Do you think the feedback that you give me is too much?
for me, nothing too much.
>> For me, nothing is too much.
and i wrote down some template which i can speak for interview below so please check if they have any errors.
>> I wrote down some templates below which I can use for the interview so please check if there are any errors.
do u know the famous statement “Singapore is a fine city.”,
do u know the famous statement “Singapore is a fine city.”,
>> Do you know the famous statement, “Singapore is a fine city.”?
As a citizen of Korea, i can’t even imagine that I can’t access to public wifi without permission and i should pay a fine becuz of access.
>> As a citizen of Korea, I can’t even imagine not having access to public WiFi without permission and paying a fee for such access.
Yes, i agree with that, becuz i’ve been there.
Yes, i agree with that, becuz i’ve been there.
>> Yes, I agree with that because I have been there.
But, Do u know the reason?
>> However, do you know the reason?
It’s becuz After the Great Chicago Fire in 1871 which destroyed a third of the city, The state authority needs to control building structure.
>> It’s because after the Great Chicago Fire in 1871 which destroyed a third of the city, the state authorities needed to control building structures.
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