Hello :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher Rina! It\'s Rachel.
There was no peoblem with microdust, but there\'s a news that 20 people caught COVID-19 in our country today.
I am so worried about that but there are only big masks except one small one in my house.
I want to talk about the article \'Golfer Park In-bee Aims for Chance to Win Another Olympic Medal\' with you.
See you soon :)
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Rachel! ^^
2. There was no peoblem with microdust, but there\'s a news that 20 people caught COVID-19 in our country today.
3. I am so worried about that but there are only big masks except one small one in my house.
The numbers are constantly increasing, right? It\'s really scary. So I always follow your advice-- wash your hand eight times a day. ^^
I hope we and our families will always be healthy!
Let\'s see each other in class in a while! ^^
- T.Rina ^^
1. Teacher Rina! It\'s Rachel.
>> CORRECT!
2. There was no peoblem with microdust, but there\'s a news that 20 people caught COVID-19 in our country today.
>> There was no problem with micro dust, but there\'s a news that 20 people are infected with COVID-19 in our country today.
3. I am so worried about that but there are only big masks except one small one in my house.
>> I am so worried about that. There are only big masks in the market, and the small ones are in my house.
4. I want to talk about the article \'Golfer Park In-bee Aims for Chance to Win Another Olympic Medal\' with you.
4. I want to talk about the article \'Golfer Park In-bee Aims for Chance to Win Another Olympic Medal\' with you.
>> CORRECT!
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