Hello. Abby

Hi,Abby I just finished having dinner with my father watching TV It was a great time because it has been a long time since we had dinner together. The more I'm getting older, the more I think that there is nothing more important and valuable than my family. I get to realize how worthy my family is. Anyway, It is not that I want to tell you I want to ask you something It is involved with the voice quality of internet telephony You know we had experienced the same problem before.But I'm not satisfied with the quality yet. All I want to know is whether you can hear my voice clearly without any noise. If you can't hear me clearly like I can't, I have to do something with it. Anyway I always thank you for your hard work. See you later

Hello [이름]! You are such a nice person. It’s good that you know now the importance of your family. Even if everyone cheats on you, your family will always be there to support you. We should be thankful having them so we must make the most out of our time spending with them. Anyhow, I noticed that you made very minimal slips on your composition. I admire you for that yet I need you to be aware of your punctuation marks. Furthermore, you’re getting better so keep it up! “_) ABBY   Hi,Abby >> Hi Abby!I just finished having dinner with my father watching TV >> I just finished having dinner with my father and now we’re watching TV.It was a great time because it has been a long time since we had dinner together. >> CORRECTThe more I'm getting older, the more I think that there is nothing more important and valuable than my family. >> As I’m getting older, I realize that there is nothing more important and valuable than my family. I get to realize how worthy my family is. >> CORRECTAnyway, It is not that I want to tell you >> Anyway, it is not what I want to tell youI want to ask you something >> CORRECT (but don’t forget your punctuation mark at the end of the sentence)It is involved with the voice quality of internet telephony >> It is about the voice quality of the internet phone.You know we had experienced the same problem before. >> You know we had experience the same problem before. But I'm not satisfied with the quality yet. >> CORRECTAll I want to know is whether you can hear my voice clearly without any noise. >> CORRECTIf you can't hear me clearly like I can't, I have to do something with it. >> If you can’t hear me clearly like I me, I have to do something about it.Anyway I always thank you for your hard work. >> CORRECTSee you later >> CORRECT (just don’t forget your punctuation mark)