Hello, Abby

2010-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Hello. I am [이름],a student who is always thankful for your hard work.(= Anyway, could I make a suggestion? That's what I was thinking during the class. You know that I have a prononciation lesson every Saturday. So, I don't think you need to correct my prononciation. Instead, I'd like you to make me learn about diverse expression while having more conversations with you. Please don't get me wrong. Be happy and stay happy See you~

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Hi [이름]! I got your point now. It’s okay with me but I will still indicate words you mispronounce every time we have the class so you will be reminded of them. Just have time doing the practice at home during your free time. Moreover, I know that we shouldn’t waste time so your wish is my command. Kikiki…….. Thank you for being frank and don’t hesitate to tell me your concerns. Furthermore, have time checking your spellings and punctuation marks too. Over all, you’re really improving. Happy Monday and take care! “_) ABBY   Hello, Abby >> Hello Abby! Hello. >> Hello!I am [이름],a student who is always thankful for your hard work.(= >> I am a student who is always thankful of your hard work. =)Anyway, could I make a suggestion? >> CORRECT but you can also have “Anyway, can I suggest something?”That's what I was thinking during the class. >> CORRECTYou know that I have a prononciation lesson every Saturday. >> You know that I have a pronunciation lesson every Saturday. (Check your spelling of the word pronunciation) >> You know that I have a pronunciation class on Saturdays.So, I don't think you need to correct my prononciation. >> So I don’t think you still need to correct my pronunciation in our class. >> So I think you don’t need to correct my pronunciation anymore in the class.Instead, I'd like you to make me learn about diverse expression while having more conversations with you. >> Instead, I’d like to learn diverse expressions while having more conversations with you.Please don't get me wrong. >> CORRECTBe happy and stay happy>> Stay happy. >> Be happy always.See you~>> See you!

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