Hello, Abby
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Abby
I was expecting you on the phone.
I heard you were away for the election.
So, did you make a good decision?
Anyway, after the class I read the comment the instructor left.
She mentioned about lack of my prononciation skill as you usually do.
You know what,after hearing that thing over and over again.
I feel like I will study harder out of pride
Abby,I have a question.
You know I have been watching a few Amerian films to improve English skill.
A sentence came up in the middle of film.
;better her than Amanda
I'm not sure it is right. Is it okay that possessive pronouns goes after "better"?
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I congratulate you for having a job well done on your composition. You made minimal glitches though always be careful of your punctuation marks and spellings as well. I also suggest you to study about the pluralization of words. With regards to your question, it’s okay to use a pronoun after the word better. From the phrase that you’ve written, it’s possible. Though there are times that they’re used as an expression or idiom. Over all, your curiosity will lead you to success. So keep on being active and explore further. Have fun this day and take care! See you! ^_^
ABBY
Hello, Abby
>> Hello Abby!I was expecting you on the phone.
>> CORRECTI heard you were away for the election.
>> CORRECTSo, did you make a good decision?
>> CORRECTAnyway, after the class I read the comment the instructor left.
>> Anyway, after my class, I read the comment of the teacher right away.She mentioned about lack of my prononciation skill as you usually do.
>> She mentioned about my poor pronunciation skill as you usually do.You know what,after hearing that thing over and over again.
>> You know what I feel after hearing that over and over again?I feel like I will study harder out of pride>> I feel like studying harder and working more to improve it.Abby,I have a questions.
>> Abby, I have a question.You know I have been watching a few Amerian films to improve English skill.
>> You know I have been watching American films to improve my English skill.A sentence came up in the middle of film. ;better her than Amanda>> A phrase came up at the middle of the movie, it was “better her than Amanda”I'm not sure it is right. Is it okay that possessive pronouns goes after "better"?>> I’m not sure if it’s right. Is it okay using a possessive pronoun after the word better?See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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