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Hello, Abby! This is my fourth composition for Power English. I always thank you for your help that checking my composition. These days I have a lot to do. What I have to do in this summer vacation. First of all, I have to raise my Toeic score. My Toeic score is 750. I hope to make it to be 850 by end of August. Next I also need OPIc score. I haven't taken the exam yet. I'll take the OPIc next month. That's the reason why I do Power English. Next is the 3th grade Chinese character ability of certificate(not sure this name) This certificate is helpful to get the job. I also would like to read a book per a day. I have two months to prepare those. I'll do on my best. See you tomorrow Abby!

Hi [이름]! You are a very determined student. All you need is diligence, confidence, patience and positive thought to pass the exams that you’re planning to take. I know that it’s hard to study but you need to enjoy and have passion on the subjects so it would be as easy as pie for you. I believe on your skills so you got to believe in yourself too. Regarding your composition, you’ve been doing well on it. However, I just noticed some errors on the usage of conjunctions, prepositions and articles in your sentences. Be more familiar of the correct sentence patterns and capitalization of words. I know you can do better if you do constant practice. So keep the good job! Enjoy your day and see you next time! “_) ABBY   Hello, Abby!>> Hello Abby!This is my fourth composition for Power English.>> CORRECT^^I always thank you for your help that checking my composition.>> I always thank you for helping and checking my compositions.These days I have a lot to do. >> I have a lot to do these days. >> I have to do a lot of things nowadays.What I have to do in this summer vacation.>> I will be very busy this summer vacation. >> I will be very busy in summer vacation.First of all, I have to raise my Toeic score.>> First of all, I have to increase/raise my TOEIC score. >> First of all, I have to prepare a lot by studying hard to raise/increase my TOEIC score.My Toeic score is 750. I hope to make it to be 850 by end of August.>> My last TOEIC score was 750 but I hope/wish to make it to 850 by the end of August. Next I also need OPIc score. I haven't taken the exam yet.>> Next is my OPIC exam, I haven’t taken the exam yet so I need to prepare a lot for it.I'll take the OPIc next month. That's the reason why I do Power English.>> I’ll take the OPIC exam next month and that’s the reason why I registered in Power English. >> I enrolled in Power English because I need to take my OPIC exam next month.Next is the 3th grade Chinese character ability of certificate(not sure this name) >> Another exam is for my 3rd grade Chinese Character licensure exam but I’m not yet sure of this. >> Another exam that I need to take to get a certificate is my 3rd grade Chinese Character ability test.This certificate is helpful to get the job.>> This certificate helps in getting a job. >> This certificate is helpful in getting a job.I also would like to read a book per a day.>> I would also like to read a book everyday. >> I would also like to read one book in a day.I have two months to prepare those. >> I have two months to prepare for those activities.I'll do on my best.>> I’ll do my best.See you tomorrow Abby! >> CORRECT^^