Hello Abby!! (5)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Abby!! How was your last weekend?
I'm so so.
This is my fifth composition.
Today I'll tell you about my school.
The university that I go to is located near Daehangno.
It is fairly far from my house and it takes nearly an hour and half to get to school by subway.
I wake up at 7 o'clock and leave home at 7:30.
In the subway, I usually read a book or listen music.
The subway is often packed with a lot of people in the morning.
I usually arrive at school at about 9 o'clock.
If I arrive faster, I have breakfast at the school cafeteria before class.
After the meal, I am usually sleepy!
Thank you Abby for reading my composition!
See you!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for always writing your composition. You've been doing well. You even did minimal corrections today yet I need you to be very careful of the capitalization of words, word choices and sentence patterns. I want you to be familiar of the correct punctuation marks as well. Moreover, you did very well on your composition! Have fun doing practices such as this and never give up! Keep up the good work! ?)
ABBY
Hello Abby!! How was your last weekend?>> Hello Abby! How was your weekend?I'm so so.>> It was good for me.
>> In my case, it was okay.This is my fifth composition.>> CORRECTToday I'll tell you about my school.>> CORRECTThe university that I go to is located near Daehangno.>> My University is near Daehangno.
>> The University I go to study is located near Daehangno.It is fairly far from my house and it takes nearly an hour and half to get to school by subway.>> It is fairly far from my home and it takes nearly an hour and a half to get to school by subway.I wake up at 7 o'clock and leave home at 7:30.>> CORRECTIn the subway, I usually read a book or listen music.>> In the subway, I usually read a book or listen to music.
>> I usually read a book or listen to music when I'm in the subway.The subway is often packed with a lot of people in the morning.>> The subway is crowded in the morning.I usually arrive at school at about 9 o'clock.>> CORRECTIf I arrive faster, I have breakfast at the school cafeteria before class.>> If I arrive earlier, I could still have my breakfast at the school cafeteria before having my first class.
>> If I arrive earlier, I could have breakfast at the school canteen before having the first class.After the meal, I am usually sleepy!>> I usually feel drowsy after having my meal.
>> After taking/eating my meal, I usually feel sleepy.Thank you Abby for reading my composition!>> CORRECTSee you!
>> CORRECT
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