Hello Abby! (6)

2010-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Hello Abby! I was surprised that it's my sixth composition for Power English! By the way, I'm so sorry. I don't have something to write here today. I feel more free writting English than speaking English. And sometimes I don't understand what you are saying to me. It's not you fault, it's my fault. Don't mind. So I'm doing effort to improve listening skill. The talk was became long. Anyway see you tomorrow!

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Hello [이름]! It’s just okay with me. The good thing is you still did make a composition and you were able to write even just few sentences for this day. Anyway, you’ve been doing a good job for your previous compositions. Just familiarize yourself with the correct punctuation marks and do constant practice at home such as reading, listening and watching American films which could help you a lot in refining your skills. As what I said, just be patient and love what you’re doing. For sure, in no time, you will easily attain the talent that you want in English. Have a great time and see you later! =)) ABBY   Hello Abby!>> CORRECTI was surprised that it's my sixth composition for Power English!>> CORRECT >> I couldn’t imagine myself writing my sixth composition for Power English. (Other choice of sentence)By the way, I'm so sorry. I don't have something to write here today.>> By the way, I’m so sorry because I don’t have anything to write here today. >> By the way, I want to say sorry that I don’t have any topic to discuss with you today.I feel more free writting English than speaking English. >> I feel better in writing English than speaking. And sometimes I don't understand what you are saying to me. >> CORRECT >> And I can’t sometimes understand your words when speaking with me. >> And I can’t understand you sometimes. It's not you fault, it's my fault. Don't mind. >> It’s not your fault, it’s mine so never mind it. >> It’s not your fault, it’s mine so don’t think about it.So I'm doing effort to improve listening skill. >> So I’m giving my effort to improve my listening skill. >> So I’m doing my best to improve my listening skill.The talk was became long.>> The conversation became longer.Anyway see you tomorrow! >> Anyway, see you tomorrow!

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