Hello, Abby

2010-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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I'm very glad to have such a good teacher just like you. yes, I agree with your idea I feel like I need to increase my vocabulary especially. I was a little confused when you said "can you read the passage "briefly"? I thought that you wanted me to summerize the sentences. That's why I said the thing in the middle of it suddenly. haha Could I make a suggestion? Why don't we keep us from reading the passage? I know it's a good way to recognize how well I pronounce the words But you know the only time we have is just 10 minutes. I don't want to spend so much time reading So if you're okay with it and I prepare for the class Could we just let it go? Thank you for your hard work. See you tomorrow~

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Hello [이름]!   I’m very glad that for your appreciation. I’m also thankful for having you as my student cause you are such a nice one. I guess you misunderstood me awhile ago. I asked you to read the passage and after that I asked you to give me the summary. Hahaha! It's ust normal anyway. Moreover, I can see great determination from you. I like your suggestion too. I believe in you, I know that you can polish your skills in no time cause I noticed that you are patient enough even just in writing this composition. You made some mistakes but always be mindful of the correct spelling of words. I need you to use punctuation marks at the end of the sentence and capitalize the first word. Be cautious of the sentence pattern as well. But nevertheless, you’re doing well. Above all, you’re very participative. Have fun learning and enjoy your day ahead! Always take care! I’ll speak with you again tomorrow!     T. Abby “_)   Here are my corrections for you: Hello, Abby >> Hello Abby! I'm very glad to have such a good teacher just like you. >> I’m very glad to have such a good teacher like you.yes, I agree with your idea >> Yes, I agree with your comments.I feel like I need to increase my vocabulary especially. >> I feel like I really need to increase my vocabulary skills >> I feel like I really need to improve most especially on my vocabulary. I was a little confused when you said "can you read the passage "briefly"? >> I was a little confused when you told me to read the passage briefly.I thought that you wanted me to summerize the sentences. >> I thought you wanted me to summarize the paragraphThat's why I said the thing in the middle of it suddenly. Haha >> That’s why I suddenly told you the main idea of the reading passage. Ha-ha! Could I make a suggestion? >> Could I make some suggestions?Why don't we keep us from reading the passage? >> Why don’t we keep on reading the passages from the book?I know it's a good way to recognize how well I pronounce the words >> I know that it could help me in familiarizing the pronunciation of words. But you know the only time we have is just 10 minutes. >> But you know we only have 10 minutes time to discuss so I guess that’s too short.I don't want to spend so much time reading >> CORRECT (DON’T FORGET YOUR PUNCTUATION MARK AT THE END OF THE SENTENCE)So if you're okay with it and I prepare for the class >> So if it’s okay with you, then I’ll always prepare for it.Thank you for your hard work. >> CORRECT See you tomorrow~ >> See you tomorrow! (DON’T FORGET TO PUT PUNCTUATION MARKS)

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