Hello, Abby
학생이 쓴 원문
You know I've been learning English for more than 14 years since I was in the middle school.
When thinking of this,I feel like I am a dumb.
And you know, There are a few native speakers at my work place.
They sometimes tell me about something They try to become friendly.So do I because they are cheerful and approachable just like you. .
Actually I can definitely understand what they are saying beacuse they don't use difficult or acardemic words. but I'm having some trouble with responding to it.
It takes a quite time to choose words in mind.
So I often say the least words or even not.
I don't care they think me a dumb.
The only thing I care about is that they think I am rude
sometimes I can't even say "thank you"
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You should always be positive. [이름] you’re such a smart student. You just need to have confidence in speaking and try to be brave enough to speak out your thoughts. Don't be ashamed if you make mistakes, the good thing there is you overcome your fear. I know that you can do great in English just by doing constant practice and studies. You don't have to worry, just be yourself and everything will be fine. You're such a wonderful person and I guess they will not think or criticize your capability in speaking English cause they will understand it. The best thing there is you communicate with them in a nice way and I guess there will be no problem with that. As what I said, have confidence. Nonetheless, you're such a good one! Don't put yourself down! Aim high! Good luck and I wish you the best! Take care and enjoy the rest of the day! ^_^
T. ABBY ^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello, Abby
>> Hi Abby!
You know I've been learning English for more than 14 years since I was in the middle school.
>> You know, I’ve been learning English since I was in Middle School so that’s more than 14 years already.When thinking of this,I feel like I am a dumb.
>> Thinking about this makes me feel like I’m a dumb.And you know, There are a few native speakers at my work place.
>> And you know, there are few native speakers at my work.They sometimes tell me about something They try to become friendly.
>> They try to become friendly by telling me some things.
So do I because they are cheerful and approachable just like you. .
>> So do I because they are cheerful and approachable like you.Actually I can definitely understand what they are saying beacuse they don't use difficult or acardemic words.
>> Actually, I can definitely understand them because they don’t use difficult words.
but I'm having some trouble with responding to it.
>> But I’m having troubles in responding them.It takes a quite time to choose words in mind.
>> It takes time for me to choose words in my thought.
>> It takes time for me choosing words to say in my thought.So I often say the least words or even not.
>> So I often say just few words or not at all.
I don't care they think me a dumb.
>> I don’t care even if they think I’m a dumb.
>> I don't care even if they think of me as a dumn.
The only thing I care about is that they think I am rude sometimes I can't even say "thank you"
>> The only thing I care about is that they might think I’m rude cause I can’t even say thank you sometimes.
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