Hello, Abegail~~
학생이 쓴 원문
By the way, what's the matter with you?
When I read your email, I could feel that you are having some problems with something.
I'm not sure what exactly it is... but is there anything that I can help you with?
If you tell me about the challenges or difficulties you have... I hope that I can help you or pray for you.
I hope everything's going right with you especially when you work for your graduation.^^
I'll write you again and I also want to hear from you.
Bye~See you~
P.S.
How's it going that you're joining OOOOOOO program?
I remember you have been eager to be the helper of the program and enjoyed it a lot. ^^
Did you have a great time there? ^^ Can you share it next time? ^^
Sincerely yours,
Y-K
강사 첨삭
Hi, OOOOO~
>>Hi 00000!
>>>Hi 0000, It's been really long time since we talked through the email last time.
>>It뭩 been a long time since we emailed each other.It's good to talk to you again.^^
>>correctYou seem very busy to prepare graduation~
>>you seem very busy preparing for your graduation.That might be very tough!! T.T
>>correctI can understand your situation very well because I myself also have gone through those experiences of busy final year of university.
>>I understand your situation, I was also a student before and graduation is really the busiest time of the year.
By the way, what's the matter with you?
>>By the way, is there something wrong?When I read your email, I could feel that you are having some problems with something.
>>When I was reading your email, I could feel that you are having some problem.I'm not sure what exactly it is... but is there anything that I can help you with?
>>I뭢 not sure what exactly it is although is there anything that I can help you with?If you tell me about the challenges or difficulties you have... I hope that I can help you or pray for you.>>correctI hope everything's going right with you especially when you work for your graduation.^^
>>I hope everything will be just fine especially on your graduation.I'll write you again and I also want to hear from you.
>>correctBye~See you~ P.S.How's it going that you're joining OOOOOOO program?
>>How was the experienced/feeling that you뭭e joined 00000 program?I remember you have been eager to be the helper of the program and enjoyed it a lot. ^^
>>I remember that you had been very eager to be one of the helpers in this program, which I enjoyed it a lot.Did you have a great time there? ^^ Can you share it next time? ^^ >>correctSincerely yours,Y-K
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