Hello, Abegail~~

2010-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 abegail

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By the way, what's the matter with you? When I read your email, I could feel that you are having some problems with something. I'm not sure what exactly it is... but is there anything that I can help you with? If you tell me about the challenges or difficulties you have... I hope that I can help you or pray for you. I hope everything's going right with you especially when you work for your graduation.^^ I'll write you again and I also want to hear from you. Bye~See you~ P.S. How's it going that you're joining OOOOOOO program? I remember you have been eager to be the helper of the program and enjoyed it a lot. ^^ Did you have a great time there? ^^ Can you share it next time? ^^ Sincerely yours, Y-K

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Hi, OOOOO~ >>Hi 00000! >>>Hi 0000, It's been really long time since we talked through the email last time. >>It뭩 been a long time since we emailed each other.It's good to talk to you again.^^ >>correctYou seem very busy to prepare graduation~ >>you seem very busy preparing for your graduation.That might be very tough!! T.T >>correctI can understand your situation very well because I myself also have gone through those experiences of busy final year of university. >>I understand your situation, I was also a student before and graduation is really the busiest time of the year. By the way, what's the matter with you? >>By the way, is there something wrong?When I read your email, I could feel that you are having some problems with something. >>When I was reading your email, I could feel that you are having some problem.I'm not sure what exactly it is... but is there anything that I can help you with? >>I뭢 not sure what exactly it is although is there anything that I can help you with?If you tell me about the challenges or difficulties you have... I hope that I can help you or pray for you.>>correctI hope everything's going right with you especially when you work for your graduation.^^ >>I hope everything will be just fine especially on your graduation.I'll write you again and I also want to hear from you. >>correctBye~See you~ P.S.How's it going that you're joining OOOOOOO program? >>How was the experienced/feeling that you뭭e joined 00000 program?I remember you have been eager to be the helper of the program and enjoyed it a lot. ^^ >>I remember that you had been very eager to be one of the helpers in this program, which I enjoyed it a lot.Did you have a great time there? ^^ Can you share it next time? ^^ >>correctSincerely yours,Y-K

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