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2013-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I heard that some nurse practitioners are working at specialized clinics, treating the patients. I also want to know more about extended role of the nurse practitioners while studying in the U.S. I, now, am in the Seoul National University. Actually, I already got admitted to the Seoul National University graduate school. And, the school of nursing scheduled an orientation on today. Even though I want to go abroad for my studies, I cannot help miss it because I am wondering how good the SNU's course is. It will start at 3:00 pm. If it won't get finished untill 5:00 pm, it is possible that we have our class through my cell-phone again on a running bus. I am sorry for that I cannot prepare stable environment for the classes. This night, I get to go on a church retreat because I am one of the members and I want to be there. So, since yesterday, I was so busy. And, it will last untill tomorrow night. T_T

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I heard that some nurse practitioners are working at specialized clinics, treating the patients. >> Correct! I also want to know more about extended role of the nurse practitioners while studying in the U.S.>> I also want to know more about the extended role of nurse practitioners while studying in the US. Oh... You\'re such a busy lady these days, Summer. But that\'s okay. WOW. SNU . . . You are admitted to a very prestigious university so I understand your feeling of wanting to attend the orientation today. I am always praying  that you will be admitted to Michigan University or Duke University though. Studying abroad might be a better opportunity for you. Anyhow, we\'ll talk about more of this later and I can\'t wait to see you again. Catch you later, Summer!^^ ~Teacher Alice I, now, am in the Seoul National University. >> I am now in Seoul National University. Actually, I already got admitted to the Seoul National University graduate school. >> Actually, I already got admitted to Seoul National University graduate school. And, the school of nursing scheduled an orientation on today. >> In fact, the school of nursing scheduled an orientation today. Even though I want to go abroad for my studies, I cannot help miss it because I am wondering how good the SNU\'s course is. >> Even though I want to go abroad for my studies, I cannot help to miss it because I am curious about how good SNU\'s course is.It will start at 3:00 pm. >> Correct! If it won\'t get finished untill 5:00 pm, it is possible that we have our class through my cell-phone again on a running bus. >> Correct! I am sorry for that I cannot prepare stable environment for the classes. >> I am sorry that I cannot prepare a stable environment for our classes.This night, I get to go on a church retreat because I am one of the members and I want to be there. >> Tonight, I have to go on a church retreat because I am one of the members and I want to be there. So, since yesterday, I was so busy. And, it will last untill tomorrow night. T_T >> So I have been busy since yesterday and it will last until tomorrow night.

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