Hello again Tina!

2013-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Yeah it's a happy Monday again. I think it is important to take a rest. Last week I felt a little tired and bored to study English. So I made up my mind that I would forget about Englsih and spend most of my time lazily on last Saturday. So I sit back home and spent most of my time for watching TV, going on a sleep or playing games. It was not bad. After that I could find interest of English. Taking a rest is really important. Hahahahahah And oh! I got a high socre in grammar! It is really heavenly to me that I always wish that someday I would be able to get 5 grade. Thank you! And have a nice day! Here is my homework 1. It's ten past twelve. 2. Pur the CD in its place,please. 3. My hometown is famous for it's old building. 4. I can't find my budgie, I think it's flown away. 5. Peter,it's never too late to learn how to play the piano. 6. The wolf made its way close to our house. 7. It's been raining for five hours. 8. I'm interested in Denmark and its people. 9. I think it's 10.It's

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your homework. Kindly go over my corrections, please. Enjoy the rest of your Monday!

---Teacher Tina---

Yeah it\'s a happy Monday again.

>> Correct.

I think it is important to take a rest.

>> Correct.

Last week I felt a little tired and bored to study English.

>> Correct.

So I made up my mind that I would forget about Englsih and spend most of my time lazily on last Saturday.

>>  So I made up my mind that I would forget about English and spend most of my time lazily on Saturday.

So I sit back home and spent most of my time for watching TV, going on a sleep or playing games.

>> So I\'ll sit back and spend most of my time watching TV,sleeping and playing games.

It was not bad.

>> Correct.

After that I could find interest of English.

>> After that I have interest in studying English again.

Taking a rest is really important. Hahahahahah

>> Correct.

And oh! I got a high socre in grammar!

>> Correct.

>> SPELLING: score

It is really heavenly to me that I always wish that someday I would be able to get 5 grade.

>> I always wish that someday I could get a grade of 5. 

Thank you! And have a nice day!

>> Correct.
Here is my homework
>> Correct.

1. It\'s ten past twelve.

>> What\'s the time? It\'s ten past twelve.

 2. Pur the CD in its place,please.\\

>> Correct.

>> SPELLING: Put

3. My hometown is famous for it\'s old building.

>> Correct.

4. I can\'t find my budgie, I think it\'s flown away.

>> Correct.

5. Peter,it\'s never too late to learn how to play the piano.

>> Correct.

6. The wolf made its way close to our house.

>> Correct.

7. It\'s been raining for five hours.

>> Correct.

8. I\'m interested in Denmark and its people.

>> Correct.

9. I think it\'s

>> I think it\'s nice to have a dog.

10.It\'s

>> Look at the horse! It\'s hurt its hoof.

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