hello Bianca~

2011-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Geiz

학생이 쓴 원문

good mornig:) yesterday late night, i got a call from my senior who is working now. we talked about lots of things. he said to me " how about going to a graduate school? it's a very good experience for you." actually, i want to go a graduate school. and my parents said to me "you'd better go to a graduate school in jeju." the graduate school my parents say is my university 's . but i want to go to the graduate school in seoul. however entering of graduate school in seoul is harder then jeju. so if i go to graduate school in seoul , i have to prepare lots of things. it need lots of money too. so i think that i work in someplace after i go to graduate school in seoul. maybe it is hard for me. but i really want to go to graduate school. good luck for me....:)

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear [이름]! ^^ It's nice to read something from you! I really appreciate it. I hope that you'll enjoy reading through! Please check the corrections well! See you! _T. Bianca_   hello Bianca! >>Hello Bianca! good mornig:) >>Good morning:)yesterday late night, i got a call from my senior who is working now. >>Late night yesterday, I got a call from my senior who is working now.we talked about lots of things. >>We talked about lots of things.he said to me " how about going to a graduate school? it's a very good experience for you." >>He said to me, "how about going to a graduate school? It's a very good experience for you."actually, i want to go a graduate school. and my parents said to me "you'd better go to a graduate school in jeju." >>Actually, I want to go to a graduate school and my parents said to me "you'd better go to a graduate school in Jeju."the graduate school my parents say is my university 's .but i want to go to the graduate school in seoul. >>The graduate school my parents talk about is my where I am studying now but I want to go to the graduate school in Seoul.however entering of graduate school in seoul is harder then jeju. >>However entering in a graduate school in Seoul is harder then Jeju.so if i go to graduate school in seoul , i have to prepare lots of things. >>So if I go to a graduate school in Seoul, I have to prepare lots of things. it need lots of money too. so i think that i work in someplace after i go to graduate school in seoul. >>It need lots of money too so I think that I will work in some place after I go to the graduate school in Seoul. maybe it is hard for me. but i really want to go to graduate school. >>Maybe it is hard for me but I really want to go to a graduate school. good luck for me....:) >>Good luck for me... :)

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