hello Bianca~
학생이 쓴 원문
good mornig:)
yesterday late night, i got a call from my senior who is working now.
we talked about lots of things.
he said to me " how about going to a graduate school? it's a very good experience for you."
actually, i want to go a graduate school. and my parents said to
me "you'd better go to a graduate school in jeju."
the graduate school my parents say is my university 's .
but i want to go to the graduate school in seoul.
however entering of graduate school in seoul is harder then jeju.
so if i go to graduate school in seoul , i have to prepare lots of
things. it need lots of money too.
so i think that i work in someplace after i go to graduate school in
seoul. maybe it is hard for me. but i really want to go to graduate
school. good luck for me....:)
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear [이름]! ^^
It's nice to read something from you!
I really appreciate it.
I hope that you'll enjoy reading through!
Please check the corrections well!
See you!
_T. Bianca_
hello Bianca!
>>Hello Bianca!
good mornig:)
>>Good morning:)yesterday late night, i got a call from my senior who is working now.
>>Late night yesterday, I got a call from my senior who is working now.we talked about lots of things.
>>We talked about lots of things.he said to me " how about going to a graduate school? it's a very good experience for you."
>>He said to me, "how about going to a graduate school? It's a very good experience for you."actually, i want to go a graduate school. and my parents said to me "you'd better go to a graduate school in jeju."
>>Actually, I want to go to a graduate school and my parents said to me "you'd better go to a graduate school in Jeju."the graduate school my parents say is my university 's .but i want to go to the graduate school in seoul.
>>The graduate school my parents talk about is my where I am studying now but I want to go to the graduate school in Seoul.however entering of graduate school in seoul is harder then jeju.
>>However entering in a graduate school in Seoul is harder then Jeju.so if i go to graduate school in seoul , i have to prepare lots of things.
>>So if I go to a graduate school in Seoul, I have to prepare lots of things.
it need lots of money too. so i think that i work in someplace after i go to graduate school in seoul.
>>It need lots of money too so I think that I will work in some place after I go to the graduate school in Seoul. maybe it is hard for me. but i really want to go to graduate school.
>>Maybe it is hard for me but I really want to go to a graduate school.
good luck for me....:)
>>Good luck for me... :)
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