hello Bianca~
학생이 쓴 원문
good evening~
finally, i found a my ideal type.
yesterday, i watched tv.
and i saw one guy who was a announcer.
he is freelancer in now.
i like decorum of him , i can feel he is a gentleman.
and he has a great academic ability . he has a degree of mba seoul national university.
but the best things what i surprised is a he's experince of marriage.
he married a women 11 years his senior who had a son . his parents object to him, but they married .
however, they divorced 7 yaers later.
i think it was a big sensation in korea.
anyway have a nice weekend~
강사 첨삭
Wow! This is really an interesting topic! Your ideal man! Will talk more about it next time we talk!!
Enjoy your weekend!
T.Bianca
finally, i found a my ideal type.
>>correctyesterday, i watched tv.and i saw one guy who was a announcer.
>>Yesterday, I watched tv and I saw one guy who was an announcer.he is freelancer in now.
>>He is a freelancer now.i like decorum of him , i can feel he is a gentleman.
>>I like his decorum, I feel like he is a gentelman.and he has a great academic ability . he has a degree of mba seoul national university.
>>and he has a great academic background. He has a degree in MBA at Seoul National Universitybut the best things what i surprised is a he's experince of marriage.
>>But the best thing that surprosed me is that he was married before.he married a women 11 years his senior who had a son . his parents object to him, but they married .
>>He married a woman who is 11 years older who had a son. His parents didn’t approve , but they still got married.however, they divorced 7 yaers later.>>However, they got divorced 7 years later.i think it was a big sensation in korea.>>I think it was a big sensation in Korea.anyway have a nice weekend~
>>correct
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