hello Bianca~

2011-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

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good evening~ finally, i found a my ideal type. yesterday, i watched tv. and i saw one guy who was a announcer. he is freelancer in now. i like decorum of him , i can feel he is a gentleman. and he has a great academic ability . he has a degree of mba seoul national university. but the best things what i surprised is a he's experince of marriage. he married a women 11 years his senior who had a son . his parents object to him, but they married . however, they divorced 7 yaers later. i think it was a big sensation in korea. anyway have a nice weekend~

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Wow! This is really an interesting topic! Your ideal man! Will talk more about it next time we talk!! Enjoy your weekend! T.Bianca    finally, i found a my ideal type. >>correctyesterday, i watched tv.and i saw one guy who was a announcer. >>Yesterday, I watched tv and I saw one guy  who was an announcer.he is freelancer in now. >>He is a freelancer now.i like decorum of him , i can feel he is a gentleman. >>I like his decorum, I feel like he is a gentelman.and he has a great academic ability . he has a degree of mba seoul national university. >>and he has a great academic background. He has a degree in MBA at Seoul National Universitybut the best things what i surprised is a he's experince of marriage. >>But the best thing that surprosed me is that he was married before.he married a women 11 years his senior who had a son . his parents object to him, but they married . >>He married a woman who is 11 years older who had a son. His parents didn’t approve , but they still got married.however, they divorced 7 yaers later.>>However, they got divorced 7 years later.i think it was a big sensation in korea.>>I think it was a big sensation in Korea.anyway have a nice weekend~ >>correct

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