hello Bianca~
학생이 쓴 원문
hey how's your day today?
i'm very tired now. because today is beginning of my lectures.
i don't have a class at morning.
but my friend and i talked that we go to the supermarket after we enter the my friend's class together.
so we went to the her class and the class over soon. because of the bigginng of her lectures.
we decided to eat lunch. while we go to eat somthing, we could feel that the whether was too bad. jeju's problem is that it has a lot of windy. so we dicided that we go to market tommorrow.
and i just ate my dinner. i really want to rest.
but i have to go another lecture :(:(:(
lt's too hard for me huh?
강사 첨삭
Things are quite tough for you… but that’s part of learning… I guess all you have to do is to take care of yourself so you would have enough energy. Also, think of your goals so you would be motivated to study… I know you can do it!
t.Bianca
hey how's your day today?>>Hey, how was your day?i'm very tired now. because today is beginning of my lectures.>>I feel very tired right now, because is the start of my classes.i don't have a class at morning.>>I don’t have classes in the morning.but my friend and i talked that we go to the supermarket after we enter the my friend's class together.>>bu my friend and I agreed to go to the supermarket after class.so we went to the her class and the class over soon. because of the bigginng of her lectures.>>So we went to class together, but it was almost over because today is just the start of our classes.we decided to eat lunch. while we go to eat somthing, we could feel that the whether was too bad. >>We decided to have lunch, while eating we noticed that the weather was bad.jeju's problem is that it has a lot of windy.
>>Jeju’s problem is that it’s windy.
so we dicided that we go to market tommorrow.
>>So we decided to just go to the market tomorrow.and i just ate my dinner. i really want to rest.
>>correctbut i have to go another lecture :(:(:(>However, I still have another class to attend to.lt's too hard for me huh?
>>It’s so hard, right?
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