Hello, Cam!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Mason^^
It\'s nice to hear from you. Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.
I also like spending the weekend in a lazy manner but there are lots of things to do like housework. You are lucky to stay
in the dormitory away from housework. You did a great job expressing your ideas but please be careful with your verb tenses.
Also, try to arrange you sentences properly especially if you are comparing past to present situations.
You did a good job here. Keep it up.^^ Take care
xoxoT. Camille^^
Here are some of my corrections for you:
I think that student also need to take a responsibility. If they don\'t, for example, they will keep bullying despite school punishment. :(
>> I think that students also need to take responsibility. If they don\'t, for example, they will keep bullying others despite having school punishments :(
Sorry for late again, Cam.
>> Sorry for being late again, Cam.
I want to be lazy in weekend sometimes haha
>> I want to be lazy on weekends sometimes. haha
And finally I\'m in the university dormitory! I slept yesterday in my home. But now I sleep in dormitory.
>> Finally I\'m in the University dormitory. I will sleep here but I slept at home yesterday.
This is not home, so I can\'t sleep easily.
>> CORRECT
Or> I cannot sleep easily because this is not my home.
Anyway, have a good night and see you tommorow :)
>> CORRECT [tomorrow]
Or> Anyway, I\'ll see you tomorrow and I hope you have a great night.
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