Hello, Carly!
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm so happy to start a course with you.
I promise I will study hard! :)
Are we going to start a book since next week?
Could you let me know how many papers I prepare?
And also I hope you to profread my letter.
I expect that I use this section for writting opinion about some article. I am going to try that for improving my English.
And I want to tell you I really happy to meet you, teacher!
I think English having a magic power. It is because I can feel someone like my close friends. Korean has honorific.
Therefore, I sometimes feel a long distance with teacher.
I felt that you are a positive and enjoyable person.
And I hope to hear your happy voice next week.
Have a nice week and god bless you!
Friendly, Lisa.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lisa! ^^, I had a lot of fun with our conversation a while ago and you too are a very enthusiastic student. You can make people around you happy because of your positive attitude. Next week, we are going to have a free talking class with the topic about 'cosmetic surgery', in that way, you could practice speaking by giving your ideas and insights. I look forward to talking with you again next week. Please check out the corrections I made for the sentences you wrote. See you next week friendly Lisa. ^^,
Teacher Carly
I\'m so happy to start a course with you.
>>CORRECTI promise I will study hard! :)
>>CORRECTAre we going to start a book since next week?
>>Are we going to start the book next week?Could you let me know how many papers I prepare?
>>Could you let me know how many papers should I prepare?And also I hope you to profread my letter.
>>And I also hope that you would read my letter.I expect that I use this section for writting opinion about some article.
>> I expect that I could use this section to write my opinion about some article.
I am going to try that for improving my English.
>> I am going to try that to improve my English skill.And I want to tell you I really happy to meet you, teacher!
>> And I want to tell you that I'm really happy to meet you, teacher!I think English having a magic power.
>> I think English have a magic power.
It is because I can feel someone like my close friends.
>>CORRECT
Korean has honorific.
>>CORRECTTherefore, I sometimes feel a long distance with teacher.
>>CORRECTI felt that you are a positive and enjoyable person.
>>CORRECTAnd I hope to hear your happy voice next week.
>>CORRECTHave a nice week and god bless you!
>>CORRECTFriendly, Lisa.
>>CORRECT
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