Hello, Carly!

2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm so happy to start a course with you. I promise I will study hard! :) Are we going to start a book since next week? Could you let me know how many papers I prepare? And also I hope you to profread my letter. I expect that I use this section for writting opinion about some article. I am going to try that for improving my English. And I want to tell you I really happy to meet you, teacher! I think English having a magic power. It is because I can feel someone like my close friends. Korean has honorific. Therefore, I sometimes feel a long distance with teacher. I felt that you are a positive and enjoyable person. And I hope to hear your happy voice next week. Have a nice week and god bless you! Friendly, Lisa.

강사 첨삭

Hi Lisa! ^^, I had a lot of fun with our conversation a while ago and you too are a very enthusiastic student. You can make people around you happy because of your positive attitude. Next week, we are going to have a free talking class with the topic about 'cosmetic surgery', in that way, you could practice speaking by giving your ideas and insights. I look forward to talking with you again next week. Please check out the corrections I made for the sentences you wrote. See you next week friendly Lisa. ^^, Teacher Carly I\'m so happy to start a course with you. >>CORRECTI promise I will study hard! :) >>CORRECTAre we going to start a book since next week? >>Are we going to start the book next week?Could you let me know how many papers I prepare? >>Could you let me know how many papers should I prepare?And also I hope you to profread my letter. >>And I also hope that you would read my letter.I expect that I use this section for writting opinion about some article. >> I expect that I could use this section to write my opinion about some article. I am going to try that for improving my English. >> I am going to try that to improve my English skill.And I want to tell you I really happy to meet you, teacher! >> And I want to tell you that I'm really happy to meet you, teacher!I think English having a magic power. >> I think English have a magic power. It is because I can feel someone like my close friends. >>CORRECT Korean has honorific. >>CORRECTTherefore, I sometimes feel a long distance with teacher. >>CORRECTI felt that you are a positive and enjoyable person. >>CORRECTAnd I hope to hear your happy voice next week. >>CORRECTHave a nice week and god bless you! >>CORRECTFriendly, Lisa. >>CORRECT

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