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2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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1.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY Q1 - The River Nile Q2 -Mount Everest is in the Himalayas. Q3 - an egg Q4 - an European Q5 - an umbrella Q6 - an university Q7 - an one-day training course Q8 - an orange Q9 - an union Q10 - an apple 2. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY If someone you love was dignosed that she is terminally ill. Are you going to tell her that she is going to die already? >> No, I'm not going to tell her the fact. Why? Because I help her to be happy during living. I have a question. Why do you give me like this kind homework? I'm sad this moring now. I'm full of a sading today. It is just a kidding. I was absent for two days because I played with my frined couple and my firfriend in valley. I'm sorry for not telling you that already. see you in class time!

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Hello! Thank you for doing your homework.^^ Great job!Even if we haven\'t talked for two days you made it a point to make your homework. So, thank you for that. See you on our next class.^^  1.HOMEWORK FOR TODAYQ1 - The River Nile >>CorrectQ2 -Mount Everest is in the Himalayas.>>CorrectQ3 - an egg>>CorrectQ4 - an European >>A EuropeanQ5 - an umbrella>>CorrectQ6 - an university>>A universityQ7 - an one-day training course>>a one-day training courseQ8 - an orange>>CorrectQ9 - an union>>a unionQ10 - an apple>>Correct 2. HOMEWORK FOR TODAYIf someone you love was diagnosed that she is terminally ill.Are you going to tell her that she is going to die already?>> No, I\'m not going to tell her the fact. >>Correct OR >> No, I\'m not going to tell her the truth.Why? Because I help her to be happy during living. >>Because I want the both of us to be happy.I have a question. Why do you give me like this kind homework? >>Well, I do believe in your skills and perhaps, I can answer your question in class. I can then answer all your questions right on the spot.I\'m sad this morning now. I\'m full of a sading today.>>I feel very sad today. It is just a kidding. >>I am just kidding. OR>>I am just joking.I was absent for two days because I played with my frined couple and my firfriend in valley. >>I was absent for two days because I played with my friends and their couples in the valley.I\'m sorry for not telling you that already. >>I\'m sorry for not telling you. OR>> I\'m sorry for not informing you.see you in class time! >>See in class!  

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