Hello, Connie
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Connie
past friday, I had took the opic test in my company.
and I had realized that OPIC test is for me.
so, I really want to get the Intermediate High level.
and, I determined to write about a OPIC Question & Answer myself everyday
for get Intermediate High Level.
Can I write the OPIC Q&A in my feed-back everyday?
Do you be inconvenienced because of me?
강사 첨삭
Hi Min,
Happy Monday, Oh if you think that will help you then I will be glad to check that for you, willingly.
I think that is a perfect idea.
Stay safe. Here are the corrections:
Connie
Hello, Conniepast friday, I had took the opic test in my company.
>>Last Friday, I took the OPIC test in my company.and I had realized that OPIC test is for me.
>> After that I realized that OPIC test is for me.so, I really want to get the Intermediate High level.
>> So, I really want to get the high intermediate level.and, I determined to write about a OPIC Question & Answer myself everyday for get Intermediate High Level.
>> To get that level I’m determined to write about OPIC questions and answers myself everyday.Can I write the OPIC Q&A in my feed-back everyday?
>> CorrectDo you be inconvenienced because of me?
>> Will that be convenient for you?
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.