Hello:D

2011-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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Hi teacher, Thank god it's Friday :) As always, I attended my class. After that, I practiced my performance for doing volunteer work. So,I knew my level of dance. It's very poor....:( Anyway, thank you for waking me up today.. again. I'll get up early in the morning because I'd like to be wait for you before you call me. Tomorrow is weekend. What are you going to do tomorrow? I'm going to work volunteer and study English and do homework. I feel like a rag these days because I have a lot of team projects and assignments. I told you about my foverite professer a few days ago. but I don't like him anymore. Because he gives us many homeworks irritatingly. Too much is worse than too little. Anyway, I'll prepare for next lesson. See you and sweet dreams like you :)

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]...
You did very well in your sentences today. Let's talk about our weekends when we talk again on Monday.
See you.
Sleep tight and Sweet dreams.

Hi teacher, Thank god it's Friday :)

>>CORRECT
As always, I attended my class.

>>CORRECT
After that, I practiced my performance for doing volunteer work.

>>CORRECT
So,I knew my level of dance.

>>CORRECT

It's very poor....:(

>>CORRECT
Anyway, thank you for waking me up today.. again.

>>CORRECT
I'll get up early in the morning because I'd like to be wait for you before you call me.

>>I뭠l get up early in the morning because I뭗 like to wait for your call.

>>I뭠l get up early in the morning because I뭗 like to be up before you call me.
Tomorrow is weekend.

>>CORRECT
What are you going to do tomorrow?

>>CORRECT
I'm going to work volunteer and study English and do homework.

>>I뭢 going to do a volunteer work, study English, and do my homework.
I feel like a rag these days because I have a lot of team projects and assignments.

>>CORRECT
I told you about my foverite professer a few days ago.

>>I told you about my favorite professor a few days ago.

but I don't like him anymore.

>>CORRECT
Because he gives us many homeworks irritatingly.

>>Because he gives us an irritating amount of homework.
Too much is worse than too little.

>>CORRECT
Anyway, I'll prepare for next lesson.

>>CORRECT
See you and sweet dreams like you :)

>>CORRECT

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