Hello :D

2010-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Teacher, It's really cold today, with a massive sandstorm.!! Anyway, One of my filipino friends called me last night, and He praised my progress in speaking English. I was able to almost understand what he says and reply in Enlgish calmly. I know he spoke very slowly for me and I said very simple, but I felt really good, because happy experiences always give me confidence.!! then, I reviewed the last class listening mp3 file, and you sound you raise a cat and dog(or, cats and dogs) right?! I'm happy we have something in common :D Oh!, suddenly snow starts to fall!!! I hope the spring weather comes soon, and I hope your weekend was good :)

강사 첨삭

Cheska, Thanks for the note. Yeah love animals and they complete my life I could never staying in a house without pets. I hope everyone would discover the joy which animals bring to humans. I am glad of your improvements. We'll study more. Hello Teacher, It's really cold today, with a massive sandstorm.!! =Hello teacher, the weather is so cold today and we are having a terrible sand storm. Anyway, one of my Filipino friends called me last night, and He praised my progress in speaking English. =correct  I was able to almost understand what he says and reply in English calmly. =I was able to understand almost everything he was saying and replied in English calmly. I know he spoke very slowly for me and I said very simple, but I felt really good, because happy experiences always give me confidence.!!=I knew he spook to me very slowly and I have been answering simply, bu I felt good because happy experiences like those gives m confidence. then, I reviewed the last class listening mp3 file, and you sound you raise a cat and dog(or, cats and dogs) right?! I'm happy we have something in common :D=I listened to our previous class recording and you were saying that you are raising both a cat and a dog. I am really happy whenever we have something in common. Oh!, suddenly snow starts to fall!!! I hope the spring weather comes soon, and I hope your weekend was good :) =Ow! It suddenly snowed, I hope spring comes soon. I hope you'll have a very good weekend.

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