Hello :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher :D:D
I missed a class yesterday, because I went to my friend's concert.
She is on vocals for her band and she invited me!
It was small concert and held in small bar. She was really beautiful last night. Although I was tired, I was able to enjoy with her songs.
P.S : Finally, My friend registered at Power English!!! and I also got free classes!! I'm really happy :D
강사 첨삭
Cheska,
Happy for you, and myself.^^ more classes for you means we’ll talk more^^. I think that program our company is really good. I’m glad you had a good time at your friend’s concert. I wonder, do they also sing in English?
Hello, Teacher :D:DI missed a class yesterday, because I went to my friend's concert.
>>I missed the class yesterday because I went to my friend’s concert. She is on vocals for her band and she invited me!
>>She is one of the vocalists on their band.
>>She is their band’s vocalist. It was small concert and held in small bar.
>>It was a small concert held at a small bar.
She was really beautiful last night.
>>correct
Although I was tired, I was able to enjoy with her songs.
>>Although I was tired, I was able to enjoy all her songs.
P.S : Finally, My friend registered at Power English!!! and I also got free classes!! I'm really happy :D
>>Correct
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